Missing Translation Review

Since I’m super skint and a major tight-ass at the moment,  I’m just playing and reviewing FREE games on steam. Despite the price tag, or lack of one, I’ve been pleasantly surprised by a few titles. Missing Translation is one of them.

The narrative is light but basically you get pulled into an alien world and have to find parts to fix the portal that transported you there. To do that, you need to explore (in a very linear way) the world and solve puzzles. Apparently you can also try to figure out the native dialect by talking to people in the world and ‘studying’ at the school, but that is optional and frankly, I didn’t bother.

The puzzles are pretty cool, in my opinion. Although there are no hints or any explanation of what to do (or why), I found them fairly intuitive and very rewarding. For a while there I felt like a flipping genius!

You have to solve 25 levels of three different types of logic puzzles. Note: 15/25 in the first set of puzzles set my brain on fire for a while there… There is no punishment for failure and often it is a mix of trial and error and puzzle planning that gets you through within a few minutes. One thing I did find annoying was that I had to ‘re-engage’ with the puzzle every round (e.g. 1/25, 2/25 etc). I guess this was to give you the option to leave the puzzle without having solved all 25, but it mostly just created dead space between rounds and unwanted extra clicks.

The whimsical ditty playing in the background made playing through so many rounds… kinda nice. The simple art style and black and white palette worked with the game and the simple narrative. There was enough detail to pull me in but not take up too much of my time (I have a 2 year old, I don’t have a lot).

Final thoughts – definitely worth a casual play.

Emily is Away Review

Emily is Away, is a retro (set in early 2000s) instant messaging style game. It takes me back to my high school days, using MSN messenger to awkwardly converse with people you might not otherwise have the guts to talk to in person. The era of this experience perfectly aligned with my experience of that time #nostalgia.

The game is basically an interactive narrative, giving you the illusion of choice in a lot of cases, by presenting you with 3 options of response during an online chat with your best friend, Emily. You chat on and off over 5 years and consequently have life changing events to discuss, including (spoiler alert!) your relationship that may or may not turn into something more than just friends. That was actually the let down for me – although I liked the game and the narrative was well paced and easy to engage with, the fact that your character IS male (whether you are or not) kind of sucks. It would have been great if there were 2 branches that followed the same story arc, but were played out as a male or female character. It would have been so easy as you are simply typing in an online chat window and have no sense of your physical person in the game. I had to play along as a broody teenage guy pining after Emily which wasn’t something I could relate to. If it had been in reverse, I definitely would have had a deeper connection with this simple, yet well executed game.



Eternally Ruthless

Eternally Ruthless is a supernatural sensation! The novel contains some elements of horror and romance but mostly consists of fast-paced action and a number of twists and turns that leave the reader wondering where the heroine’s allegiance really lies.
The story follows Ruth Wroth, a career-driven hirer and firer, who—after her own premature death—finds herself working for GlobalCore — a global corporation that is quite literally, Hell on Earth. Her new eternal occupation entails terminating Lucifer’s human employees, effectively killing them and reaping their souls in preparation for the coming Rapture. 
Where Eternally Ruthless is unique is in its corporate portrayal of both Heaven and Hell and their divine leaders. Although Ruth is tasked with brutally murdering heinous criminals, often in terrifying situations, the book’s ever-present dark humour presents her job as similar to that of any other office worker. Compulsory ergonomic assessments and water-fountain gossip are scattered amongst brutal yet satisfying murders and nail-biting escapes.
Ruth is strong and independent, and she does not suffer fools; she is consequently not particularly lucky in love. Ruth’s abrasive nature adds complexity to her character and depth to her transition from a ruthless career woman into someone who appreciates that there is much more to life (and death) than work. She finds love, friendship and a new outlet for her extreme work ethic—plotting against the Devil himself.  

Oxenfree Review

This game is aaaaaall about the narrative. Oxenfree’s story follows Alex, a teenage girl, struggling to cope with the recent death of her brother. At the same time she’s learning to accept her new stepbrother, Jonas.

The game starts with Alex, her stepbrother and her friends on a ferry to an abandoned island for a night of reminiscent fun. Soon after they arrive, Alex finds her hand-held radio is picking up strange signals and voices. After a brief interlude of teenage angst and conversation, Oxenfree dives into supernatural suspense.

Playing as Alex you explore the island and talk with friends, uncovering the secrets of Oxenfree’s characters and world as you do so.

Now for my thoughts on the game…

The game mechanics are quite simple but very cool. Your time is spent walking around a mostly 2D environment, usually with a friend or two. But the magic is in your radio that’s frequently used for clever interactions and lends itself well to the supernatural horror setting. You are also in constant conversation with a friend or two. Speech bubbles with multiple options to choose from appear over Alex’s head and you select the option or let them fade away if you choose to remain silent. You can offend other characters and change the course of the game by the selections you make.

Speaking of characters, all of the character backstories and dialogue is very realistic and interesting. You really want to get to know them, and quickly begin to translate their actions against their history.

So what didn’t I like about Oxenfree?

There was an hour or so in the middle of the game where I started to get bored of the constant chatter and seemingly useless choices to be made. Walking and talking, walking and talking and talking while walking. Also, the game map is a little tricky to use with various forks and alternative routes that can sometimes leave you frustrated (after walking for 30 minutes, only to find you went the wrong way and have to back track for screens and screens). Luckily, the story pulled me back in and I ended up finishing the game, quite content.

The only other brief annoyance was the intermittent “quizzes” towards the end of the game that depended on your knowledge of the island history. I tried my best to tune into island history points and listen read relevant plaques and signs but I think, since there are alternative routes to places, sometimes key areas are bypassed and then consequently I had no idea of correct answers. It’s not really important whether you “fail” the quiz or not, but it got on my nerves a bit.

Over all, the game made for an interesting and fun few hours. The interactive story and characters were the prize in this game. I definitely recommend everyone play it, no matter what your preference of game.

FTI Writing for Games Course (Day 4)

Time to get down to the nitty-gritty practical stuff. The topic for Day 4 was, Tools and Processes.

We started by comparing two games, side by side – Gone Home and Everyone’s Gone to the Rapture. This was to compare the game’s engines Unity vs. Unreal 4. We saw that the Unity game – Gone Home, allowed for a lot more in-depth object interaction but required a constrained environment (a house). The Unreal 4 game was set in an open world with amazing graphics but didn’t allow for much object interaction at all. So, this means that the very game engine chosen will dictate much of a game’s design and therefore the method of telling the story.

Next we dove into the assets produced in a game and the tools used to create and manage text assets. The narrative designer’s bible is the story bible (that really is the correct terminology). This document is everything narrative including the story outline, characters profiles, plot points, story intensions, emotional hits, location descriptions, game synopsis, timeline of events, even down to marketing material. Anthony uses Scrivener to build this essential document which is produced in the pre-production phase.

The class went on to discuss the obvious importance of version control when numerous assets must be maintained, tracked and changed together. For example, a change to the story bible could require a change to the game design document, manuscript and the game strings already embedded in the game engine. While we are on the subject, the game design document is different to the story bible in that it is more about the implementation of the game. For example, the GDD describes how the game looks in scenes from a game play perspective.

We talked about tools to help “get our story into the game” with Twine being the top-tool, since we are already using it for our own game projects. Inform and Inkle were also called out as useful tools that can generate game strings from story or dialogue. In many cases, studios may just collect game strings in an Excel spreadsheet.

Anthony suggested that we would provide more value as narrative designers if we understood terminology, challenges and limitations of specific game engines. The best way to do this is to practice some level design using designers such as Shadowrun Returns, Minecraft or Super Mario maker! We were also encouraged to look at GameMaker Studio, RPG Maker, Adventure Game studios for making our own games.

The class closed with the inspirational (that’s right Anthony) story of how Anthony Sweet made his way as a narrative and game designer. It took planning and eight years of execution to achieve but in Perth’s tiny market, it is certainly something to be proud of. We need to make our own plans and identify what we can offer to studios, as well as what we can improve on. A narrative designer needs to do a lot more than just write the game story, they should also be able to contribute to or write:

  • Marketing material
  • Manuals
  • Wikis/Guides
  • Coms (Internal and External)
  • Style Guides – e.g. “this is the way you talk about your game” The language used. Buzz words.
  • Social Media
  • Comics
  • Novalisations
  • Character social media
  • Profiles and lore excerpts

So now I will go away and think about what I can do for a studio as well as watch the Double Fine Adventure documentary to get a better idea of what really goes on during game production.

FTI Writing for Games Course (Day 3)

The third session focused on characters.

Initially we looked at the features and attributes of a Player Character – PC  (as opposed to a Non Player Character  –NPC) and discussed “Player Verbs” and game mechanics. Player verbs determine HOW a story can be told. For example if a player can walk and collect things, the story can be delivered by exploring a scene and examining objects. Player verbs are supported by the game mechanics e.g. Press and hold X to do [player verb].

I found this very interesting article on Gamasutra but here is a short exert on the subject:

The lower the number of player verbs, the easier it is to control the variables and rein in scope. However, a low number of verbs can result in more and more onus being put on out-of-game narrative mechanisms to convey a story. For example, if all the player verbs in a game have to do with combat and none have to do with traversal movement, then how will you bridge from one combat context and location to another? With no option to provide the player an interactive journey from Point A to Point B, you will likely lean upon noninteractive storytelling techniques to establish a change of location and a new reason and context for the next battle. This can range from the simple, five-second panning of images in between Angry Birds worlds all the way up to the sumptuously rendered, ten-minute cutscenes from the Metal Gear Solid series. As you make the hard decisions about player verbs, keep in mind that the more narrow your focus in this area, the more you might be overburdening the noninteractive narrative tools at your disposal.

Another point to consider with regard to player verbs is that people and fictional characters are, in many ways, defined by the choices they make and what they do. In a game, a playable character ends up doing only the things the designers allow. Thus, the gameplay verbs that are available to a player character define, in a very basic way, who that character is. It’s important to realize that player verbs and the player’s character are inextricably interwoven, and should be concepted and developed concurrently.

Further, if you are using a pre-existing character as a (or the main) playable in your game, be aware that the character may come with baggage that includes a bevy of implied verbs. Spider-Man, for example, has inherent wall-crawling and web-swinging abilities that can cause waking nightmares for your level designers and camera designers/engineers. Other characters may imply other abilities.

We then went on to look at NPCs and relationship systems. The example of a relationship system Anthony used was an in-game shop, where if a player spends more than X dollars, the shopkeeper provides a 10% discount for future purchases. A cool game that includes a complex relationship system is  the teenage horror game, Until Dawn. Not only does the PC switch between NPCs but relationships are formed based on your interactions as the PC.

FTI Writing for Games Course (Day 2)

In this session, we took the classic writing rule of “show, don’t tell, and reshaped it to apply to interactive game narrative, so it became “interact, don’t show.” The idea is that you should allow/encourage a player to interact with an object or scene to build an understanding of their world or circumstance, instead of spelling everything out with visuals and/or text. An example of a game that does this extremely well (in my opinion) is Gone Home. The player returns to their empty family home with little or no context of who they or their family members are. The whole game is about exploring the house and interacting with objects, such as photos, notes, audio recordings, personal effects etc, to uncover the family history and the game’s underlying narrative.

The question was then raised – how do you deliver exposition to players? Our presenter then explained lots of interesting ways games are explaining the “detail of what is going on” in the form of character diaries, audio recordings, historic documents, news stories (overheard), emails etc. Very cool.

We then went on to talk about meaningful choice in games, using Tell Tale’s the walking dead as a case study. Tell Tale Games base their games on episodic events and strong narrative that require choices rather than exploration or action.  In the Walking Dead, the player has to make many choices throughout the game, some being simple dialogue selection and some being meaningful choices (these have an impact on the player and sometimes AI). An example of a meaningful choice might be to save or to kill another character. This calls on the player to consider their own beliefs or attitudes in the game. We learned that meaningful choices are expensive and introduce risk during game development so a good narrative designers want to give players the illusion of meaningful choice.

Finally we discussed Generative narrative and authored vs systemic narrative. This prompted me to look up an old game called, Dwarf Fortress, which is touted as the most systematic immersive game ever created. Interesting stuff!

FTI Writing for Games Course (Day 1)

Thankfully I have some amazing friends, else I wouldn’t have known about the FTI Writing for Games course that started this week. I was delighted to get the heads-up from those who know me best, and promptly booked in to the six week course run by Anthony Sweet.

Anthony started his own company in Perth called, Hand Written Games (awesome name huh?) and works as the lead designer at Black Lab Games. The man has a wealth of information about the industry based on his experience in Perth. This is valuable for us local writers who want to understand how to compete in this small, niche industry.

I thought I’d write a short post after each session to capture my thoughts and learnings – so here goes:

Day/Night 1

The room was full of bright-eyed guys and gals from all different backgrounds. We introduced ourselves by saying our name and the last game we played (mine was Oxenfree) and consequently, I just downloaded episode 1-5 of the Life is Strange series on Steam.

Anthony explained the role of the Games Writer Narrative Designer and where, typically, the role fits in to the Game Production Process. This was something I found particularly interesting because the Narrative Designer is often brought in quite late in the game’s development phases. Initially I thought the narrative would drive the game design rather than the other way around, but then I made some comparisons with my own profession – Software Engineering – and it made complete sense. Let me explain –

In an ideal world, user stories and requirements should drive the design of software but often the particular system or technology platform that we are building upon has plenty of constraints. This means we tend to prioritise requirements that better fit within these constraints and push back on those ‘pie in the sky’ ideas that would be really cool, but are going to be EXTREMELY hard to implement (Me with my project manager hat on is now underlining $$$$ on the whiteboard while client frowns and developers chew their nails nervously).

My projects are smoother, more agile and deliver better outcomes when 80% of the design is decided before the client turns up for the kick-off meeting. We give them their 20% to go wild with and usually this is enough to create a happy balance.

So it sounds like indie Game production follows the same sort of principles. The game engine, existing artefacts and artwork dictate approx. 80% of the design and so the Narrative Designer has 20% left to work with. If they can understand the constraints, massage the narrative to remove unnecessary complexity and patch the “gaps” (in the other 80%) with some fancy-fiction, then they will be a truly valuable resource to the team.

We looked at a few case studies in the class but the one that stood out was, Freedom Fall by our local StirFire Studios. There is no dialogue in the games and the narrative is delivered through sassy graffiti scrawled across the walls of the background. It really demonstrated how a small amount of text could provide so much insight into the game’s narrative and characters. This has now inspired me to learn the art of the Haiku – a little says a whole lot. So here is one I whipped up after reading the supplied blog post by David Gaider: http://www.polygon.com/2016/8/15/12455728/how-to-get-a-job-writing-games-maybe

Not sugar-coated,

writing for games is tricky.

but I still want in!

// Note: Haikus are hard! Everything I want to say has 4 –  not 5 syllables!



Journey Review

Journey, produced by Thatgamecompany and published by Sony Computer Entertainment for PS3 on March 13 2012

This beautifully unique and magically presented game tells its story without words, leaving awestruck players to develop their own theories for the purpose, lesson and conclusion of the journey. Here are my own:

I’ll cut to the chase; Journey is about life – all of it, simplified into 2-3 hours of tranquil, curious play. The subject is very topical for me at the moment as I am a new mother of a 9-month-old baby girl. Watching her grow and learn about herself and the world around her is an entertaining joy and so is Journey because it invokes a similar wonder and pleasure.

Puer (the name I’ve given our cloaked protagonist) is reincarnated from the stars to find himself with very little knowledge about his world (a windy, undulating desert) and limited ability to communicate or move around – just like a baby. The landscape is awe-inspiring and vast and Puer seems so small and insignificant. As he moves through his journey, he slowly gains skills and understanding; now he can have a bigger impact on the world around him. He meets and takes guidance from others who help him along the way (cloth creatures and spirits). He slowly grows and ages, although this is not visible of his character, it is the made apparent by the environment around him. Suddenly there are more complex problems to solve, histories to understand and a visual richness bringing to light detail that makes the mind wonder and guess at the past.

Puer’s scarf seems to represent knowledge and his life force. As he discovers and interacts with his world it grows in length and gives him power to move more easily through his environment. At the same time, the history of his world is slowly revealed. A once thriving population lived within a great city but the introduction of technology and eventual war caused the fall of the civilization. This history lesson is an important part of Journey. As Puer uncovers the past, he has aspirations for his future – knowledge is power, actions have consequences, be better than those before you. You feel a sadness at the loss of something once great and it drives you to want to ‘fix’ the world, but that is not the purpose of your Journey.

By the time Puer reaches the snow-covered mountain (the mother), he has aged substantially. His scarf is covered in frost, hindering his power to float and fly. It also represents the cloudiness in his knowledge – it is still there but it can’t be easily accessed. Puer’s movements are slow, impeded by powerful icy winds. Friends hover far away, high in the sky and are no longer much help. Some die around him, reminding him of his own dwindling mortality. Foes are lurking around every corner. The world has become a scary, difficult place.

Thankfully as he nears the end, Puer has a chance to be free of the shackles of age once more. He accepts his fate and returns to the source of all life – the mountain peak. Now he lives in his mind and is free of the burden of his body. He remembers the good times, his relationships and how far he has come. He finds peace and at that moment he is ready to die. As his soul is released from his body, it is returned to where it all began…

A cloaked being awakes in the dunes, ready to begin a new journey.


The game story gets 5/5 symbol stars. The fact that much of it is up for interpretation is a tribute to its intricate and personal subject – life.

Good Gaming – An Update

Some time ago I wrote a post about my gaming history. Video games have been a big part of my life and have brought me hours of enjoyment over many years. This week a few uncanny occurrences caused me to rethink what gaming means to me today. So what happened,  you ask. Well…

Firstly, I came out of a post natal depression funk (the reasons I haven’t posed here for some months) and realised the thing I wanted to do most was play games. I’d been advised to ‘remember what I liked doing’ and ‘do it’ again. Depression has a way of sapping all your desire to do anything aside for feel tired and shitty, but somehow I scrapped together enough gusto to go out and buy a game I’d heard a lot about – Journey.

Secondly, I got a response back from a reputable game development company in Mexico (my most favourite place), after I’d offered my creative writing services. They were keen to have me collaborate on a game they were currently developing in Spanish with an aim to translate and localise for English speaking countries. Holy Guacamole!

Finally, a film producer friend contacted me and revealed he was making a documentary about women in games (players, developers, designers etc). After some discussion he suggested that I be the ‘backbone’ of the story – using my gaming history, career choice and recent dabbling in games writing as the core content. Exciting!

So, here I am again, reflecting on the role of gaming in my life. I thought I’d try and list the games I remember playing, despite knowing many have been lost to the foggy mire of my terrible memory. Anyway, here goes (in no particular order and not listing versions):

 PC  Arcade  Console
 Firepower  TMNT  Mario Brothers
 Packman  Golden Axe  Snack Rattle n Roll
 Tetris  Mortal Kombat  Yoshi’s Island
 F-18 Interceptor  Tekken  Donkey Kong
 Indiana Jones  Ghouls n Ghosts  Loaded / Reloaded
 Bubble Bobble  Time Crisis  Need for Speed
 Super Frog  Buck Hunter  Oddworld
Kings Quest  Duck Hunt  Crash Bandicoot
Quest for Glory  Galaga  Silent Hill
 Space Quest  1943  Assassin’s Creed
Heroes’ Quest  X-men  GT
 Giana Sisters  Point Blank  Halo
Road Rash  Tekken  Star Wars
 Kick Off  Street Fighter  Splinter Cell
 Marble Madness  Space Invaders  Call of Cthulhu
 Heimdall  Destroy All Humans
 Moonstone  GTA
 Lemmings Call of Duty
 Legend of Kyrandia  Red Dead Redemption
 Elder Scrolls  The Matrix
Curse of Enchantica  God Of War
 Prince of Persia  Heavy Rain
 Double Dragon  Borderlands
Altered Beast  Starsky and Hutch
 Myst  Portal
 Square Heroes  Journey
 Time Splitters

I know there are plenty more I have just forgotten about but still it was fun recalling those who have stuck with me. I highlighted some my favourites in each category. As you can see, my preferred platform is console but I’m planning on hitting the PC again since there is just so much awesomeness on Steam (I’m thinking Limbo next).

I hope this post has stirred up your gaming memories 🙂 Let me know if you think I’ve missed any epics.